Composition: Composing Literary Texts (TEKS.ELA.8.11.A) Practice Test
•17 QuestionsI thought I knew the gym, but it looked different with everyone watching. Our class had to share short speeches, and mine was about my dad's old guitar. I waited with my note cards, trying to breathe slowly. The microphone squeaked when I stepped up. I said my name and started the story, but the words felt thin. I told how the guitar was scratched and how I learned three chords, and I tried to make a joke. Some people smiled, but I wanted them to really see it. My hands were shaking a little, and I rushed the ending. When I sat down, my friend bumped my shoulder. I nodded, thinking about what I meant to say and didn't. on that bright, humming day.
Which revision best improves the piece's literary craft while preserving its original purpose and voice?
Which revision best improves the piece's literary craft while preserving its original purpose and voice?