Common Core High School ELA Question of the Day

Add multiple rhetorical questions and exclamation points to make the tone more urgent and attention-grabbing.

Insert personal anecdotes about lunches from elementary school to make the piece more relatable, leaving the structure as is.

Adopt a respectful, solutions-focused tone; include specific, credible evidence (cost comparisons, nutrition guidelines, student survey data); and restructure into clear claims with proposed options and a brief counterargument.

Focus on correcting comma splices and changing a few informal words while keeping the current argument and tone.