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Writing Standards: Narrative Writing with Depth and Structure (CCSS.W.9-10.3) Practice Test

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At the new school, I walked into the cafeteria feeling like I had arrived late to a movie. The tables were set in long rows, and people seemed to know exactly where to sit. I carried my tray and pretended to study the options, though I kept circling the same island of fruit cups. I planned to find a corner and read while I ate, but there wasn't really a corner, just a back wall with a recycling bin. A group laughed at one table. I considered sitting there but kept moving. The bell system here was different; lunch felt shorter than I expected. I realized I had been wandering for several minutes and hadn't taken a bite. A student in a jacket with the school logo glanced at me, then looked away. I imagined my old school's table near the windows. Finally I sat alone by the back wall. The chair scraped loudly.

Which revision best strengthens the narrative through improved technique and clearer event sequencing?

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