Writing Standards: Narrative Writing with Depth and Structure (CCSS.W.9-10.3) Practice Test
•11 QuestionsAt the new school, I walked into the cafeteria feeling like I had arrived late to a movie. The tables were set in long rows, and people seemed to know exactly where to sit. I carried my tray and pretended to study the options, though I kept circling the same island of fruit cups. I planned to find a corner and read while I ate, but there wasn't really a corner, just a back wall with a recycling bin. A group laughed at one table. I considered sitting there but kept moving. The bell system here was different; lunch felt shorter than I expected. I realized I had been wandering for several minutes and hadn't taken a bite. A student in a jacket with the school logo glanced at me, then looked away. I imagined my old school's table near the windows. Finally I sat alone by the back wall. The chair scraped loudly.
Which revision best strengthens the narrative through improved technique and clearer event sequencing?
Which revision best strengthens the narrative through improved technique and clearer event sequencing?